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Hold Me Now by JeweledFaith Hold Me Now by JeweledFaith
Fall asleep to dreams of home
Where the waves are crashing
The only place I've ever known
Now the future has me
I see the fire in the sky
See it all around me
I said the past is dead
The life I had is gone

Said I won't give up
Until I see the sun

Hold me now
Until the fear is leaving
I am barely breathing

Waking up and letting go
To the sound of angels
Am I alive or just a ghost
Haunted by my sorrows
Hope is slipping through my hands
Gravity is taking hold
I said I'm not afraid
That I am brave enough

I will not give up
Until I see the sun

Hold me now
Until the fear is leaving
I am barely breathing
Crying out
These tired wings are falling
I need you to catch me

As I burn, as I break
I can't take it anymore
I'll return to the place
Where the waters covers over everything
Rescue me somehow

Hold me now
Until the fear is leaving
I am barely breathing
Crying out
These tired wings are falling
I need you to catch me

Hold me now
Until the fear is leaving
I am barely breathing


This is what I'd been going through lately and a tribute to the Sandy Hook Victoms and their families.




Crinsom © Shawnie J. Peck
Hold me Now © RED
Base © *Xbox-DS-Gameboy
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Instead of using pre-made Spirit layouts, why not use your own drawings/sketches/layouts? Your colors are very thought out and deserve their own pieces. I know you can do it. Not everyone starts out perfect, but if you practice, practice and practice with the goal of greatness, it will be achieved. I was told by a very good friend of mine, that if i sketch daily, improvements will come naturally. Spirit is highly over used and over rated. I would love to see someone's amateur *made-with-their-own-sweat-and-tears artwork, over something that had been pre-made to be colored. If you have it in your imagination, you can do it! :hug:
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